Talk:Sex offense (dictionary): Difference between revisions

From BoyWiki
User4 (talk | contribs)
No edit summary
User4 (talk | contribs)
No edit summary
Line 9: Line 9:
*4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies.
*4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies.
*5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English.
*5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English.
*6) "that have been" does not agree with "a sex offense".
[[User:User4|User4]] ([[User talk:User4|talk]]) 00:11, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
[[User:User4|User4]] ([[User talk:User4|talk]]) 00:11, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Revision as of 00:14, 8 April 2016

I disagree with the changes you have made to the definition. User4 (talk) 23:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

What is there to disagree with that is basically the legal definition?--Etenne 00:02, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
"A sex offense is a sexual act or type of conduct frequently considered obscene that have been legislated to be illegal."
  • 1) A sex offense does not have to be a sexual act.
  • 2) It is clumsy and very poor English to refer to a sex offense as "a type of conduct".
  • 3) "Frequently considered" does not indicate either the frequency or by whom it is considered.
  • 4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies.
  • 5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English.
  • 6) "that have been" does not agree with "a sex offense".

User4 (talk) 00:11, 8 April 2016 (UTC)