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*4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies. | *4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies. | ||
*5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English. | *5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English. | ||
*6) "that have been" does not agree with "a sex offense". | |||
[[User:User4|User4]] ([[User talk:User4|talk]]) 00:11, 8 April 2016 (UTC) | [[User:User4|User4]] ([[User talk:User4|talk]]) 00:11, 8 April 2016 (UTC) |
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I disagree with the changes you have made to the definition. User4 (talk) 23:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- What is there to disagree with that is basically the legal definition?--Etenne 00:02, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
- "A sex offense is a sexual act or type of conduct frequently considered obscene that have been legislated to be illegal."
- 1) A sex offense does not have to be a sexual act.
- 2) It is clumsy and very poor English to refer to a sex offense as "a type of conduct".
- 3) "Frequently considered" does not indicate either the frequency or by whom it is considered.
- 4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies.
- 5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English.
- 6) "that have been" does not agree with "a sex offense".