Talk:Pedophilia: Two different worlds

Just some suggestions... the way you were going with your first intro was a better explanation, that this was part of the Danish Pedophile Association webpage (i.e. an historical document from a BL website) without that, it not really an encyclopedia article. Frankly, I think it would be better if the whole article was about the Danish Pedophile Association who they were, what they believed, when and why they disappeared etc... with this being a sub-page or a section of that entry. --Etenne 13:46, 3 May 2016 (UTC)